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JusTReaL {VS} SezsioN
JusTReaL
I'm expressin the lessons 2 Seszion, Providing'em wit all tha information, be patient, You don't wanna get touched, get smoked faster then ah blunt, You can call me Evil Kanival, tha way that I stunt, You bout as ah crooked as ah line walked by ah drunk, Homoslice, Po-Po's n Vice, some of the things involved in your life, I'm sharper then ah knife, I'm the higher price, You just struck seven on the dice, I'm too nice, Thatz why tha hood callin me JusTReaL, cuz my bars as hard as steel, My pen the lighta, I'm the ghostwrita, Making you see more Red then Spyda, your not ah ryda, You only Chump change while I'm top dolla, Come hard or why bother 2 even holla, you weak so bounce like ah balla, Get the fuck up out mines, get left hooked by one of my lines, Attached to my rythmes like ah crime, ill as shit evrytyme, I'm authentic, tha head tenant, I'm about 2 win it, You about 2 catch an L, I'm hotter then hell If you made yourself an album, it would'nt sell, o'well, Throw in Towel, your not built for this, I'm about tah put you outta business, So listen, realize who your dissing before your missing, Put ah bullet in your frame, have you shitting n pissin, I'm delivering ah sick package to you faggot, you want it, you can have it, My flows pro n you lack it, so fallback kid, Your tracks wack as shit, 50 Cent don't even wanna hear it ah "Lil Bit", I'm selling clovers tah Lil Flip, you only ah Lil shit, Acting like Nicholas Cage, but I make you gone in 60 seconds, Ayo check it, let me wreck it, wit wat I'm spitting, Troy Aikman is wat I'm gripping, And put 23 in you like Lebron James, You wanna snoop and play the game, I can't be controlled or contamed, It's runnin through my veins cuz I'm dope, I'm purer then coke, You ah hoax, doing ah B Rabbit and straight choke cuz you ah straight joke, Aim, Pull, Cock, Gunsmoke, Gunsmoke, Soft like ah banana on the inside n out, Here's the mic, now tell me wat it about... SezsioN SezsioN's a force, dont you ever fuck with veterans whore JBee's verse was shit...but it was wayyy better than yours! Quote:
Actually I feel cheated cuz I’m beating his ass for FREE  As a teen I was cuffed a lot, screaming out FUCK THE COPS!!! You had a Checkered past too… …cuz you seem to get Jumped a lot This is a sweep, and I doubt any head was hatin’ on him Why would they? he’s worse than the Mc Education forum The shit I do to you makes death look less than minimal Volunteer for hatchet trick that makes ya head invisible Letz-have-a-war…I have to warn gets-bad-with-sports Head-cracks-and-pours when I check-bats-for-cork Ya head will need a full plate when it cracks and split Then I’ll have him hit with slugs equipped with magnet tips This is getting cruel forget the duel can we get a truce Hope you don’t mind if I bury the hatchet next to you Heat’s gonna get raised similar to sunnier days Like every woman you date ya IQ is under ya age Split decisions and put ya piece of mind in my pocket You only drop science when failing bio in college Ya highest level of education’s from a nursery Try to murder me and Murder is my First-Degree I give credit where due but you’ll never have the props As of right now you’ve had your fair share of the Laughing Stock Caught huggin ya teddy when I popped slugs in ya belly Only toast ya ever held came with butter and jelly All my talking’s done in battle, thatz what veterans do Fuck a 5 pg. dispute of why I’m better than you When I’m about to drop niggaz is expectin’ a slaughter Fuck a half assed verse this is less than a quarter This is what happens if you catch a couple of these strays They’ll fucking end you quicker than the WBA You’ll be deceased in a flash moment you bleed and collapse You couldn’t drop with skill even if he agrees to collab I’m a sly viper known for slaughterin’ these fags Throttle ya speech fast and leave cats like Joshua Trees av Cough and ya breath fast, tore ya face with a knife..slowly taking ya life This verse is a warning to those to know what itz like when I’m motivated to write Know ya shakin’ in fright, check this pros thesis the flow’s Jesus Get ya bones cleaved then in need of prosthesis Whole pieces of flesh torn, ya fetus is still birth When it comes to a text war I’ve been in more Arenas than Gilbert Shoes bounce on ya lung, shoot out? I’m ready and crazy Slugs hit ya wig and leave ya duet like R. Kelly and Jay-z I’m telling ya lady I can get her at will You can’t even say “Dick suck” cuz we all know that Richard is ill Itz simply said you simply dead, wonder why ya niggaz fled? Cuz they saw the infrared, stick to usin’ pencil lead Killaz move in with the techs, through ya living room and bed If you choose to move ya DEAD! Spittin’ 2 into ya chest Take a breath………..of course I’m bound to do the best Thinking otherwise you’ll get tortured down in Budapest… …Remove ya chest, thatz what the rifle does Fuck around and lose a pint of blood while you lie in mud Got kids? I’ll tie em’ up, blow their chin off when I blaze the chrome ^Ex-kal was right, I can spit lines like that and STILL win off my name alone Your verse was long as fuck and I aint read all of that babble Don’t take it personal, I’m JusTReaL tired of these garbage ass battles Letz forget sparring for now cuz my fist knockin him down T h i s b a r i s h o w f a r I m a d e h i m l i f t o f f o f t h e g r o u n d
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JusTReaL
I'm expressin the lessons 2 Seszion, Providing'em wit all tha information, be patient, You don't wanna get touched, get smoked faster then ah blunt, You can call me Evil Kanival, tha way that I stunt, You bout as ah crooked as ah line walked by ah drunk, this opening section was alright, flowed nicely though nothing really hit too hard.. does have the intro of a battle verse i guess Homoslice, Po-Po's n Vice, some of the things involved in your life, I'm sharper then ah knife, I'm the higher price, You just struck seven on the dice, I'm too nice, okay, same thing again, nothing really hard but i cant say its weak either Thatz why tha hood callin me JusTReaL, cuz my bars as hard as steel, My pen the lighta, I'm the ghostwrita, Making you see more Red then Spyda, your not ah ryda, You only Chump change while I'm top dolla, Come hard or why bother 2 even holla, you weak so bounce like ah balla, lol, okay wack shit Get the fuck up out mines, get left hooked by one of my lines, Attached to my rythmes like ah crime, ill as shit evrytyme, wack I'm authentic, tha head tenant, I'm about 2 win it, You about 2 catch an L, I'm hotter then hell If you made yourself an album, it would'nt sell, o'well, WACK Throw in Towel, your not built for this, I'm about tah put you outta business, So listen, realize who your dissing before your missing, Put ah bullet in your frame, have you shitting n pissin, wack I'm delivering ah sick package to you faggot, you want it, you can have it, My flows pro n you lack it, so fallback kid, Your tracks wack as shit, 50 Cent don't even wanna hear it ah "Lil Bit", I'm selling clovers tah Lil Flip, you only ah Lil shit, not bad i guess, but i still think its wack Acting like Nicholas Cage, but I make you gone in 60 seconds, Ayo check it, let me wreck it, wit wat I'm spitting, Troy Aikman is wat I'm gripping, wack flip of an old concept thats been used more than cell phones And put 23 in you like Lebron James, You wanna snoop and play the game, I can't be controlled or contamed, It's runnin through my veins cuz I'm dope, I'm purer then coke, You ah hoax, doing ah B Rabbit and straight choke cuz you ah straight joke, Aim, Pull, Cock, Gunsmoke, Gunsmoke, Soft like ah banana on the inside n out, Here's the mic, now tell me wat it about... wackkkkkkkkkk vs. Fuck all 15 of them niggaz keeping the cash from me Actually I feel cheated cuz I’m beating his ass for FREE okay, not the strongest opener but set the tempo going As a teen I was cuffed a lot, screaming out FUCK THE COPS!!! You had a Checkered past too… …cuz you seem to get Jumped a lot simple and dope This is a sweep, and I doubt any head was hatin’ on him Why would they? he’s worse than the Mc Education forum lol, simple & effective again The shit I do to you makes death look less than minimal Volunteer for hatchet trick that makes ya head invisible wasn't really feeling this, but it was worded nicely Letz-have-a-war…I have to warn gets-bad-with-sports Head-cracks-and-pours when I check-bats-for-cork dopeeee Ya head will need a full plate when it cracks and split Then I’ll have him hit with slugs equipped with magnet tips dopeeee This is getting cruel forget the duel can we get a truce Hope you don’t mind if I bury the hatchet next to you old but effective. worded nice, had ur own ring to it Heat’s gonna get raised similar to sunnier days Like every woman you date ya IQ is under ya age DOPE Split decisions and put ya piece of mind in my pocket You only drop science when failing bio in college played but effective i guess, considering JustReal didnt have any real worldplay or flips Ya highest level of education’s from a nursery Try to murder me and Murder is my First-Degree dope, simple. hit. thought it coulda been flipped better tho I give credit where due but you’ll never have the props As of right now you’ve had your fair share of the Laughing Stock DOPE Caught huggin ya teddy when I popped slugs in ya belly Only toast ya ever held came with butter and jelly dope All my talking’s done in battle, thatz what veterans do Fuck a 5 pg. dispute of why I’m better than you When I’m about to drop niggaz is expectin’ a slaughter Fuck a half assed verse this is less than a quarter this is where JusTReal gets his ass handed to him This is what happens if you catch a couple of these strays They’ll fucking end you quicker than the WBA You’ll be deceased in a flash moment you bleed and collapse You couldn’t drop with skill even if he agrees to collab dopeeeeee, perfect time for a personal. i think? I’m a sly viper known for slaughterin’ these fags Throttle ya speech fast and leave cats like Joshua Trees av hahahahhaa Cough and ya breath fast, tore ya face with a knife..slowly taking ya life This verse is a warning to those to know what itz like when I’m motivated to write dopeeeeeeeeeeeee braggodocio Know ya shakin’ in fright, check this pros thesis the flow’s Jesus Get ya bones cleaved then in need of prosthesis filler, but dope Whole pieces of flesh torn, ya fetus is still birth When it comes to a text war I’ve been in more Arenas than Gilbert dope Shoes bounce on ya lung, shoot out? I’m ready and crazy Slugs hit ya wig and leave ya duet like R. Kelly and Jay-z played but effective, again I’m telling ya lady I can get her at will You can’t even say “Dick suck” cuz we all know that Richard is ill didnt really get this, but im guessing its related to RC? no? Itz simply said you simply dead, wonder why ya niggaz fled? Cuz they saw the infrared, stick to usin’ pencil lead dopeeee Killaz move in with the techs, through ya living room and bed If you choose to move ya DEAD! Spittin’ 2 into ya chest Take a breath………..of course I’m bound to do the best Thinking otherwise you’ll get tortured down in Budapest… dopeeee …Remove ya chest, thatz what the rifle does Fuck around and lose a pint of blood while you lie in mud Got kids? I’ll tie em’ up, blow their chin off when I blaze the chrome ^Ex-kal was right, I can spit lines like that and STILL win off my name alone Your verse was long as fuck and I aint read all of that babble Don’t take it personal, I’m JusTReaL tired of these garbage ass battles Letz forget sparring for now cuz my fist knockin him down way to end it, i like them simple name flips. i woulda thrown something like that in too overall as you can see, Sesh had a whole lot more DOPE's than JustReal and it seemed like he was on some B.Rabbit shit on a bus home from the food stamp factory but that's fine. Sesh still texting? Sick. Long ass verses from both you niggaz but sesh took it for sure. vote - SezsioN |
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damn i can't believe sezsion is still here writing verses...
I'm expressin the lessons 2 Seszion, Providing'em wit all tha information, be patient, You don't wanna get touched, get smoked faster then ah blunt, You can call me Evil Kanival, tha way that I stunt, You bout as ah crooked as ah line walked by ah drunk, Homoslice, Po-Po's n Vice, some of the things involved in your life, I'm sharper then ah knife, I'm the higher price, You just struck seven on the dice, I'm too nice, ^^^wtf? that was just plain stupid... Thatz why tha hood callin me JusTReaL, cuz my bars as hard as steel, My pen the lighta, I'm the ghostwrita, Making you see more Red then Spyda, your not ah ryda, You only Chump change while I'm top dolla, Come hard or why bother 2 even holla, you weak so bounce like ah balla, Get the fuck up out mines, get left hooked by one of my lines, Attached to my rythmes like ah crime, ill as shit evrytyme, I'm authentic, tha head tenant, I'm about 2 win it, You about 2 catch an L, I'm hotter then hell If you made yourself an album, it would'nt sell, o'well, ^^^really? i mean, come on dogg, reeeaaally?..."if you made yourself an album it wouldn't sell, oh well" and "get the fuck outta mines, get left hooked by one of my lines, attached to my rhymes like a crime, ill ass shit everytime"...once again: REEEAAALLY??? Throw in Towel, your not built for this, I'm about tah put you outta business, So listen, realize who your dissing before your missing, Put ah bullet in your frame, have you shitting n pissin, I'm delivering ah sick package to you faggot, you want it, you can have it, My flows pro n you lack it, so fallback kid, Your tracks wack as shit, 50 Cent don't even wanna hear it ah "Lil Bit", I'm selling clovers tah Lil Flip, you only ah Lil shit, ^^^where's the punchlines? where's the metaphors? where's the imagery? where's the coherent rhyme scheme? where are any of the things that make up a good battle verse? Acting like Nicholas Cage, but I make you gone in 60 seconds, Ayo check it, let me wreck it, wit wat I'm spitting, Troy Aikman is wat I'm gripping ^^^maybe you could've done something nice with the gone in sixty seconds, but you didn't..."ayo check it, let me wreck it with what i'm spitting"...WTF? niggas in the 70s was rapping with better lyrics, and rap was barely invented back then! troy aikman is what you're gripping? what is that even supposed to mean? And put 23 in you like Lebron James, You wanna snoop and play the game, I can't be controlled or contamed, It's runnin through my veins cuz I'm dope, I'm purer then coke, You ah hoax, doing ah B Rabbit and straight choke cuz you ah straight joke, Aim, Pull, Cock, Gunsmoke, Gunsmoke, Soft like ah banana on the inside n out, Here's the mic, now tell me wat it about... ^^^even if this entire verse was some shit you spit off the top of the head in real time in a live battle, you'd get boo'd off the stage...take into account the fact that you have more time to come up with hard disses in a keystyled verse, and this is just an absurd attempt at battling on your part...don't think i'm hating, cuz i started reading the verse expecting you to be on some ill shit if you got sezsion to come out of retirement to battle your ass, but wow...i am thoroughly disappointed... and sezsion, old friend, long time no talk! i hope your verse is better than justreal's, i really do... SezsioN's a force, dont you ever fuck with veterans whore JBee's verse was shit...but it was wayyy better than yours ^^^not the illest thing ever, but i love the simple disses..."his verse was shit and still better than yours"...coulda done better, but decent opener... Fuck all 15 of them niggaz keeping the cash from me Actually I feel cheated cuz I’m beating his ass for FREE ^^^that was funny! As a teen I was cuffed a lot, screaming out FUCK THE COPS!!! You had a Checkered past too… …cuz you seem to get Jumped a lot This is a sweep, and I doubt any head was hatin’ on him Why would they? he’s worse than the Mc Education forum The shit I do to you makes death look less than minimal Volunteer for hatchet trick that makes ya head invisible Letz-have-a-war…I have to warn gets-bad-with-sports Head-cracks-and-pours when I check-bats-for-cork Ya head will need a full plate when it cracks and split Then I’ll have him hit with slugs equipped with magnet tips This is getting cruel forget the duel can we get a truce Hope you don’t mind if I bury the hatchet next to you ^^^the checkered past line was nice...the education forum line is pretty played out...i have to warn gets bad with sports? wtf? that rhyme scheme was kinda forced...duel and truce? don't really rhyme to me, but maybe your accent makes it work, iono...this whole section was just kinda flow...i get the feeling you weren't trying very hard... Heat’s gonna get raised similar to sunnier days Like every woman you date ya IQ is under ya age Split decisions and put ya piece of mind in my pocket You only drop science when failing bio in college Ya highest level of education’s from a nursery Try to murder me and Murder is my First-Degree I give credit where due but you’ll never have the props As of right now you’ve had your fair share of the Laughing Stock ^^^still kinda just flowing...the laughing stock was a cool flip, but didn't really hit very hard...just an interesting play on words... Caught huggin ya teddy when I popped slugs in ya belly Only toast ya ever held came with butter and jelly All my talking’s done in battle, thatz what veterans do Fuck a 5 pg. dispute of why I’m better than you ^^^now that's more like the sezsion i remember! the five page line was classic...once again, very simple diss, but it hits hard, especially with the rhyme scheme...though this is the second time you used veteran as part of your rhyme scheme in the verse... When I’m about to drop niggaz is expectin’ a slaughter Fuck a half assed verse this is less than a quarter This is what happens if you catch a couple of these strays They’ll fucking end you quicker than the WBA You’ll be deceased in a flash moment you bleed and collapse You couldn’t drop with skill even if he agrees to collab I’m a sly viper known for slaughterin’ these fags Throttle ya speech fast and leave cats like Joshua Trees av ^^^i think you might be serious with the less than a quarter line lol...but the WBA line was dope...i remember that shit!...i lost to weapon x in like week five i think...the drop with skill line was nice...and tho i haven't seen joshua tree's avatar, the rhyme scheme was nice, and i'm assuming it's something funny, but i can't say it hit terribly hard, as i don't know what his avatar says... Cough and ya breath fast, tore ya face with a knife..slowly taking ya life This verse is a warning to those to know what itz like when I’m motivated to write Know ya shakin’ in fright, check this pros thesis the flow’s Jesus Get ya bones cleaved then in need of prosthesis ^^^still kinda just flowing...don't know if you intended prosthesis to be part of the multisyllabic there...cuz it's not a sharp O...it's a flat O...the flow's Jesus...you been listening to tech nine, nigga lol? Whole pieces of flesh torn, ya fetus is still birth When it comes to a text war I’ve been in more Arenas than Gilbert Shoes bounce on ya lung, shoot out? I’m ready and crazy Slugs hit ya wig and leave ya duet like R. Kelly and Jay-z I’m telling ya lady I can get her at will You can’t even say “Dick suck” cuz we all know that Richard is ill Itz simply said you simply dead, wonder why ya niggaz fled? Cuz they saw the infrared, stick to usin’ pencil lead Killaz move in with the techs, through ya living room and bed If you choose to move ya DEAD! Spittin’ 2 into ya chest Take a breath………..of course I’m bound to do the best Thinking otherwise you’ll get tortured down in Budapest… ^^^gilbert arenas was a nice play...leave ya duet? i'm not sure i get what you mean by that, unless you were just saying you'll split his head into two pieces, in which case it was kinda forced...the richard is ill line was dope...pencil lead, haha...the room and bed to budapest was a nice rhyme scheme, reminiscent of your old stuff, and it was nice all around... …Remove ya chest, thatz what the rifle does Fuck around and lose a pint of blood while you lie in mud Got kids? I’ll tie em’ up, blow their chin off when I blaze the chrome ^Ex-kal was right, I can spit lines like that and STILL win off my name alone Your verse was long as fuck and I aint read all of that babble Don’t take it personal, I’m JusTReaL tired of these garbage ass battles Letz forget sparring for now cuz my fist knockin him down ^^^while you lie in mud is kinda ehh...lie in THE mud...but you always have had a habit of doing that kinda thing in your rhyme schemes, so i'm used to it...the name alone line was dope...once again, simple disses...sarcastic wit is where it's at!...the garbage line leads me to believe, again, that you weren't really putting much effort into this...the offa the ground line was cool, i get the visual wordplay in text, but it wasn't anything special... overall, justreal completely sucked total ass in this battle...i can't say i was that impressed with sezsion's verse, especially knowing what he's capable of when he tries (you beat me in our battle, you asshole!!  ), but there's no way that justreal's verse even comes close to touching sezsion's half assed verse...don't call me a hater, i just spit it how i see it...vote: sezsion...and hit a nigga up sometime! it's been too long
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are you fucking retarded?????? you do realize that this was from like 4 years ago dude....wtf your an idiot!!
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wow what a dumbass
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i hope both of you burn in hell
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lol y mad?
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and tsohg, i'm mad cuz niggas like you and this clown seem to follow me around looking for reasons to talk shit to me...i don't start the shit, but i constantly have to respond to it...CASE IN POINT WHY THE FUCK ARE YOU IN THIS THREAD???
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